None of these couples did, so what was the rush? I just didn't buy it.more The only logical reason to rush things like that is if you're waiting until marriage to have sex. THREE couples in this book were engaged (or about to be engaged, in Jeff and Ari's case) and married in this book. That's completely unrealistic and very rarely does it happen - and when it does, the couple usually ends up divorced.
I HATE how it's becoming a normal thing in books like this to just go off and get married while you're still in school, without having even dated for a year. And I can't imagine there being enough story left for there to even BE a decent sequel, anyway.ġ0. Does that mean there's going to be a sequel or what? Not that I'll read the sequel, but still. She got pissed and ditched Gunner for a couple of weeks for dirty dancing with some girl, but it's okay for her to do the exact same thing to him?! Ellie, you're an obnoxious, whiny, immature twatface that deserves to get punched in the neck!!!ĩ. The double standards annoyed the crap out of me. If another girl was even in the same vicinity as Gunner, she'd bristle up like a cat and get pissed at Gunner and run off and automatically assume that he was cheating on her.
Ellie's jealousy was childish and obnoxious and made me want to slap her in the face. Ellie and Gunner's inner dialogue sounded the exact same most of the time.Ĩ. This made her characters seem even more immature than they already did.ħ. Every other word was "fuck" or "dickwad" or something like that. I know the author has defended this by saying she had to stay true to her characters and that her characters cuss or something like that, but I just don't care. And the story as a whole was very cliche.Ħ. Sometimes I cared more about the secondary character's storyline (Ari and Jeff) than I did the primary character's storyline. Does the author not know what a comma is?! HAVE PEOPLE PROOFREAD AND EDIT YOUR WORK BEFORE SELF PUBLISHING, PEOPLE!!Ĥ. Examples: then where there should be a than, to where there should be a too, etc.ģ. It read like an unedited Wattpad story or something.Ģ. And then you put it up and read it a year later and realize that while the story isn't a bad idea, the writing is crap, and that you need to start all over. You know, that first book that you write that you absolutely LOVE and is PERFECT and is your baby, etc. And actually, it reads like the author's first book. This book reads like an unedited first draft. I try not to be mean or harsh in reviews if I can help it, but this book. And then you put it up and read it a year later and realize that while the story isn't a bad idea, the writing is cr There are so many things wrong with this book. There are so many things wrong with this book. What will it take for them to realize they are all each other have ever WANTED?. Will Ellie ever be able to let go of the past and let him into her heart and will Gunner be patient enough to wait for her? Gunner knows they are meant to be together forever, but Ellie keeps denying her feelings out of fear of being hurt again.Įvery time he gets close to winning her love, something pushes her away again. He will stop at nothing to show Ellie how much he wants her, even if it means he has to move faster than she would like. Gunner only had two passions in life, football and his grandfather’s ranch, until he falls for his best friends little sister. The last thing Ellie expected was to fall in love with Gunner Mathews, a starting linebacker for the University of Texas football team and not to mention, her brother's best friend. She focused all of her attention on her grades and getting into the University of Texas to start a new life away from her mother.
The last thing Ellie expected was to fall in love with Gunner Mathews, a starting linebacker for the University of Te Verbally abused by her mother for years, 18 year old Ellie Johnson always believed she would never be loved or wanted by anyone. Verbally abused by her mother for years, 18 year old Ellie Johnson always believed she would never be loved or wanted by anyone.
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